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'Working together to succeed'


Today's lesson doesn't even need a powerpoint!  


LO:   I can effectively edit a piece of writing.  


Watch this video and use Tom Palmer's tips to help you edit your work.  I had planned for us to use this in the classroom.  Never mind: see what you can do with it at home.  


Watch the video through without stopping it.  Then start it again but, this time, have your piece of work from yesterday in front of you.  Keep stopping and starting the video so you can edit your work, as Tom guides you through how he edits his own.  His paragraph took him 10 minutes... I'm expecting it'll take you slightly longer!


Remember to LEVEL UP your vocabulary choices - use a thesaurus to help you - and your punctuation.  Can you include the following?  ; : () "" ...